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![]() ![]() Credits: 331 | I dare to love you I dare to care I dare to call you And play with your hair Can you accept that i need you Can you accept my past Can you look to the future Can you beleve your the best I dare to tell you You mean everything I dare to forgive what you hav done But can you forgive me for telling you your the one The one I need the most The one I need to see The one who lifts me off my feet You can hav The rest of me You can hav all of me There is just one more thing You have to promise me You won't abandon me I'll dare and you won't care what i give for you love to make sure you are above my dare. The last part didn't make much sence but i still ... I don't no i need advice.. dose anyone understand this? |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 22,483 | Re: Dare it is a pretty nice poem, lol i do understand what you mean in the last paragraph, keep it up.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 110 | Re: Dare Ummm as a great poet as i am I'm not to sure about that? But this poem is fantastic.
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