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    Newbie Elreka may be famous one day Elreka may be famous one day Elreka's Avatar
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    Red face Dare

    I dare to love you
    I dare to care
    I dare to call you
    And play with your hair

    Can you accept that i need you
    Can you accept my past
    Can you look to the future
    Can you beleve your the best

    I dare to tell you
    You mean everything
    I dare to forgive
    what you hav done

    But can you forgive me
    for telling you your the one

    The one I need the most
    The one I need to see
    The one who lifts me off my feet

    You can hav The rest of me
    You can hav all of me

    There is just one more thing
    You have to promise me
    You won't abandon me

    I'll dare
    and you won't care
    what i give for you love
    to make sure you are
    above
    my dare.



    The last part didn't make much sence but i still ... I don't no i need advice..
    dose anyone understand this?

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    Re: Dare

    it is a pretty nice poem, lol i do understand what you mean in the last paragraph, keep it up.

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    Re: Dare

    Ummm as a great poet as i am I'm not to sure about that? But this poem is fantastic.
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