Once I flew and almost touched the sky,
Took some inspirations from these word called "Love"...
Awesome things I've seen from you,
Can take me down until the night reaches through...
As my dark wings spread and cover your eyes...
Can't see the rays of light as it follows you through,
But once I heard those words from you,
I want to cut my wings and walk alone...
My eyes that are happy before,
Becomes too sad and meaningless...
My wings which brings me to you,
Falls it's feathers one by one just to forget you...
I want to cry, but my eyes are dry,
I'm always want a fight, but I'm shaking inside...
I want to hold, embrace you tight...
But where are you..? Your gone in my sight...
I fly slowly and think what's wrong..?
Until I think of something, what have I done...
I stopped flying, fell spinning...
I breakdown, and cry...
...
That poem expresses extreme sadness of lost love...
Every word in this poem is filled with deep meaning.
I am amazed on the way you made this poem. The emotions, the words and the wording is beautiful. This poem creates imagery in my mind.
This poem almost made a tear fall from my eye.
Great job Sousuke!
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Thank you for you comment Raja... I appreciate it...
I just work on it few minutes ago...
Your welcome Sousuke. i look forward to read more of your poems.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
You have your own unique style and I think it's awesome! Keep up the good work and I'm truly looking forward to more awesome poetry from you in the future!
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