Dark Blue

This is something i just wrote about someone very special to me. And they will never really know how much they mean to me. And have made my life brighter because there in it. Without them, i dont know how i could honestly keep going in this moment. There my weakness and my fight.

Imagine your breath
Touching me
My blood rushes through me
Pinks my cheeks
Settles in calm breathes
Eyes wide, lashes like wings
Soaring into you
Your lips part
And I stop
Attentively letting it run through me
Observing your eyes penetrate my body
Sliding closer to you
Coupled hands
Looking away as though
You have taken away my strength
Admit defeat
Consume me in you
In your arms
Take me

that was good, and that means alot coming from me because i dont usually like poems and suff.............very.......how should i put it............a combination of emotion and passionite, but at the same time erotic

Wow, if someone typed that about me i'd even shed a tear..........

wow...that is very... Very sexy in a way i guess lol. sounds really i dont kno how to say it??

very awesome tribute you really know how to express yourself
in this poem . this guy must really be speacil and very nice for you
to think of him like this. very awesome poem

I agree with Chris...Whoever this guy is...He sure is a lucky fellow to have such a lovely piece of writing written for him...I really like the fact you kept it PG, lol. :)


Who is He? I wish to learn from him. Does he give lessons on how to treat women? OMG!!!

*scratches head in deep thought*

OMG you have my love T.N. under your Sig...are T.N. his initials? OMG!!! He and I have something in common already!!!! Yikes!!! Small world..:D

Lol...funny pig XD

This guy musta made u dizzy and woozy lol :D very nice ^_^

Trung your such a dork .