Dark and Broken Heart

Dark and Broken Heart

Take my hand, And lead the way
Take my smile, I don't think I can ever again
Take my heart, It's falling apart
Take my soul, There is nothing left to hold!...

"Nothing left at all"

I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...

"Waiting for the end"

I'm sick and tired of being here, Can't I just rest in peace?
Never alone, Always surround by them all
I'm sick of them, Can't they just leave me be?!
I wanna be alone but those fools don't seem to get it, I'm messed up in the head and worse...i'm broken into!...

"Sick and tired of everything"

Give me some relief of it all, Can I just have a bit of space?
A place to call me own, Where no one may enter but me
Somewhere that I can let all my pain and sorrow out, Someplace safe like the darkness
Darkness is where I feel safe, In the dark is where i'll stay!...

"Lying in the darkness"

I can't take it anymore, I can't stand it all no more
I'm gonna scream till I lose my hearing, And listen to the ringing
I hold my head and let it all out, One by one the tears begin to fall
I cry and I scream, Till I bleed!...

"Till my tears turn red"

Can't I just stay in the darkness forever, Why do I have to face the light?
I don't wanna see, I'd rather be blind
I don't wanna hear, I'd rather be deth
I don't wanna smile, Cause that'd mean my defeat!...

"I wont lose to the light"

I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...

"Waiting for the end, So that it will finally be the end"

I'm sick and tired of being here, Can't I just rest in peace?
Never alone, Always surround by them all
I'm sick of them, Can't they just leave me be?!
I wanna be alone but those fools don't seem to get it, I'm messed up in the head and worse...i'm broken into!...

"Sick and tired of everything, I just wanna be alone and have a little peace"

Take my hand, And lead the way to eternal darkness
Take my smile, I don't think I can ever again after what you all did
Take my heart, It's falling apart into pieces and I can't put them back together
Take my soul, There is nothing left to hold onto in this messed up and cruel world anymore!...

"Nothing left at all in this world for me.
Darkness is what awaits me with open arms.
I'm finally released from the light and free to rome the night.
I'm finally alone and able to rest in peace....in the darkness of my own heart."....

That was a very dark song. It was directly to the point of how most people feel about how they seem to never have the chance to be alone and how everytime they try someone is always there. I've felt like that sometimes. Great job sis and I look forward to reading your next one.

Thank you sooooooooooo much Sis!!! *hugs* :) I'm glad that you like it. :) I was hopeing that it would come out somewhat dark,since I haven't wrote anything like that in awhile lol.Thanks again sis *hugs* :)

beautifull poem i loved it and i know how you feel on this one
as well wanting someone to take your hand ,but know one does
and thats sad but how you put into a song is awesome

I have no words that can describe this song! Excellent job writing this song Angel! True talent through and through! Keep up the magnificent job and as always I'm looking forward to more of your work!:smile::thumb:

@ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you sooooooooooo much big bro!!! *hugs* :) I'm so glad that you loved it. :) And as promised I wrote something dark..well somewhat dark lol. :) Thanks again big bro!! :)

@ BlueFox1-Thank you soooooooooooo much Fox!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it so much. :) I was kinda surprised with the outcome of the song but i'm glad that it did come out the way it did lol. :) Thanks again Fox!!! :)

I like the tone of this song.a bit different from the last one.of course with the dark mood,it is very special.I admire the use of repetition as well.Reaches its meaning to us more easily.

This poem really speaks pou to you and i like this part

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I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...

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unno it just bring up a sick image in my head.