+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 3 1 2 3 LastLast
Results 1 to 8 of 23

Thread: Dark and Broken Heart

  1. #1
    Sorrow's Angel Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Hidding Under The Covers hehe XD
    Posts
    688
    Thanks
    40
    Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts

    Dark and Broken Heart

    Dark and Broken Heart

    Take my hand, And lead the way
    Take my smile, I don't think I can ever again
    Take my heart, It's falling apart
    Take my soul, There is nothing left to hold!...

    "Nothing left at all"

    I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
    I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
    I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
    I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...

    "Waiting for the end"

    I'm sick and tired of being here, Can't I just rest in peace?
    Never alone, Always surround by them all
    I'm sick of them, Can't they just leave me be?!
    I wanna be alone but those fools don't seem to get it, I'm messed up in the head and worse...i'm broken into!...

    "Sick and tired of everything"

    Give me some relief of it all, Can I just have a bit of space?
    A place to call me own, Where no one may enter but me
    Somewhere that I can let all my pain and sorrow out, Someplace safe like the darkness
    Darkness is where I feel safe, In the dark is where i'll stay!...

    "Lying in the darkness"

    I can't take it anymore, I can't stand it all no more
    I'm gonna scream till I lose my hearing, And listen to the ringing
    I hold my head and let it all out, One by one the tears begin to fall
    I cry and I scream, Till I bleed!...

    "Till my tears turn red"

    Can't I just stay in the darkness forever, Why do I have to face the light?
    I don't wanna see, I'd rather be blind
    I don't wanna hear, I'd rather be deth
    I don't wanna smile, Cause that'd mean my defeat!...

    "I wont lose to the light"

    I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
    I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
    I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
    I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...

    "Waiting for the end, So that it will finally be the end"

    I'm sick and tired of being here, Can't I just rest in peace?
    Never alone, Always surround by them all
    I'm sick of them, Can't they just leave me be?!
    I wanna be alone but those fools don't seem to get it, I'm messed up in the head and worse...i'm broken into!...

    "Sick and tired of everything, I just wanna be alone and have a little peace"

    Take my hand, And lead the way to eternal darkness
    Take my smile, I don't think I can ever again after what you all did
    Take my heart, It's falling apart into pieces and I can't put them back together
    Take my soul, There is nothing left to hold onto in this messed up and cruel world anymore!...

    "Nothing left at all in this world for me.
    Darkness is what awaits me with open arms.
    I'm finally released from the light and free to rome the night.
    I'm finally alone and able to rest in peace....in the darkness of my own heart."....
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

  2. #2
    Heavy Metal Goddess CherryBlossom18 may be famous one day CherryBlossom18 may be famous one day CherryBlossom18's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun
    Posts
    578
    Thanks
    1
    Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts

    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    That was a very dark song. It was directly to the point of how most people feel about how they seem to never have the chance to be alone and how everytime they try someone is always there. I've felt like that sometimes. Great job sis and I look forward to reading your next one.
    "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
    Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
    Thanks so much I love it!

  3. #3
    Sorrow's Angel Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Hidding Under The Covers hehe XD
    Posts
    688
    Thanks
    40
    Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts

    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    Thank you sooooooooooo much Sis!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it. I was hopeing that it would come out somewhat dark,since I haven't wrote anything like that in awhile lol.Thanks again sis *hugs*
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

  4. #4
    Fish Fingers & Custard Ice Hockey Champion, Smaugs Treasure Champion, Mini Putt 3 Champion, Ant Tracks Champion, Jungle Hunt Champion, Madnetics Champion, Manole Champion, Blokken Champion, Fast Food Fiasco Champion, Shapes Hifters Champion, Mud and Blood: Vietnam Champion HolderOfTheDarkChalice is making a name for themselves HolderOfTheDarkChalice is making a name for themselves HolderOfTheDarkChalice's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2006
    Location
    someplace where the only light is the moon above
    Posts
    3,118
    Thanks
    102
    Thanked 70 Times in 64 Posts

    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    beautifull poem i loved it and i know how you feel on this one
    as well wanting someone to take your hand ,but know one does
    and thats sad but how you put into a song is awesome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

  5. #5
    Devoted Otaku BlueFox1 may be famous one day BlueFox1 may be famous one day BlueFox1's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2006
    Location
    A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
    Posts
    585
    Thanks
    9
    Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts

    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    I have no words that can describe this song! Excellent job writing this song Angel! True talent through and through! Keep up the magnificent job and as always I'm looking forward to more of your work!

  6. #6
    Sorrow's Angel Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Hidding Under The Covers hehe XD
    Posts
    688
    Thanks
    40
    Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts

    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    @ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you sooooooooooo much big bro!!! *hugs* I'm so glad that you loved it. And as promised I wrote something dark..well somewhat dark lol. Thanks again big bro!!

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you soooooooooooo much Fox!!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it so much. I was kinda surprised with the outcome of the song but i'm glad that it did come out the way it did lol. Thanks again Fox!!!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

  7. #7
    Shichibukai JefferyXie may be famous one day JefferyXie may be famous one day JefferyXie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2006
    Location
    Sydney
    Posts
    613
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    I like the tone of this song.a bit different from the last one.of course with the dark mood,it is very special.I admire the use of repetition as well.Reaches its meaning to us more easily.

  8. #8
    Abomination Smacky Champion, Celebrity Power Lifte Champion, Crash Test Dummy High Jump Champion, Super Track 2001 Champion, Endless Flight Champion, Drop Kick Champion, Bloody Rage Champion, Dropkick The Faint Champion, Splash Back Champion Spin Da Ish is off to a good start Spin Da Ish's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jan 2007
    Posts
    792
    Thanks
    5
    Thanked 6 Times in 5 Posts

    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    This poem really speaks pou to you and i like this part
    I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
    I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
    I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
    I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...
    unno it just bring up a sick image in my head.

+ Reply to Thread
Page 1 of 3 1 2 3 LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. have u ever had ur heart broken
    By equinn in forum Poems
    Replies: 21
    Last Post: Oct 16, 2006, 11:45 AM
  2. Agony, pian ... a broken heart
    By Rave_Grip in forum Poems
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: Sep 19, 2006, 01:52 PM
  3. how do you mend a broken heart?
    By moongoddess in forum The Chat Forum
    Replies: 44
    Last Post: Jun 17, 2006, 02:19 AM
  4. have you ever had your heart broken??
    By equinn in forum The Chat Forum
    Replies: 21
    Last Post: Jun 08, 2006, 09:24 PM
  5. Heart Broken...
    By Shade/K' Heart in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: Mar 07, 2005, 09:12 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts