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    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    @ JefferyXie-Thank you soooooooooo much!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it. Yes it is a bit different from my others.I just felt like writting something different again lol. Thanks again!

    @ Spin Da Ish-Thank you. And i'm sorry about the image that got put into your head.I only meant for it 2 seem emotionly,like crying and stuff lol. Sorry about that.
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    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    I love this... It's dark which almost made me fall head over heals over it. LOL I love your wording too. Only thing is, I don't like reading lyrics as much as I do poems. I just don't know the beat. ^_^ But it's still an awesome write.

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    Wow,thanks for the awesome comment Darkened_Star!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it even though it is lyrics and that you think it's awesome! Thanks again sooooo much!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Dark and Broken Heart

    Take my hand, And lead the way
    Take my smile, I don't think I can ever again
    Take my heart, It's falling apart
    Take my soul, There is nothing left to hold!...

    "Nothing left at all"

    I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
    I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
    I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
    I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...

    "Waiting for the end"

    I'm sick and tired of being here, Can't I just rest in peace?
    Never alone, Always surround by them all
    I'm sick of them, Can't they just leave me be?!
    I wanna be alone but those fools don't seem to get it, I'm messed up in the head and worse...i'm broken into!...

    "Sick and tired of everything"

    Give me some relief of it all, Can I just have a bit of space?
    A place to call me own, Where no one may enter but me
    Somewhere that I can let all my pain and sorrow out, Someplace safe like the darkness
    Darkness is where I feel safe, In the dark is where i'll stay!...

    "Lying in the darkness"

    I can't take it anymore, I can't stand it all no more
    I'm gonna scream till I lose my hearing, And listen to the ringing
    I hold my head and let it all out, One by one the tears begin to fall
    I cry and I scream, Till I bleed!...

    "Till my tears turn red"

    Can't I just stay in the darkness forever, Why do I have to face the light?
    I don't wanna see, I'd rather be blind
    I don't wanna hear, I'd rather be deth
    I don't wanna smile, Cause that'd mean my defeat!...

    "I wont lose to the light"

    I'm hollow on the inside, Nothin left inside but the lonelyness
    I'm broken into pieces, I'm all broken apart on the inside and out
    I'm frozen on the inside, No warmth can get through to my poor broken heart
    I'm so tired of it all, I'm just wishing for the end to come and claim me!...

    "Waiting for the end, So that it will finally be the end"

    I'm sick and tired of being here, Can't I just rest in peace?
    Never alone, Always surround by them all
    I'm sick of them, Can't they just leave me be?!
    I wanna be alone but those fools don't seem to get it, I'm messed up in the head and worse...i'm broken into!...

    "Sick and tired of everything, I just wanna be alone and have a little peace"

    Take my hand, And lead the way to eternal darkness
    Take my smile, I don't think I can ever again after what you all did
    Take my heart, It's falling apart into pieces and I can't put them back together
    Take my soul, There is nothing left to hold onto in this messed up and cruel world anymore!...

    "Nothing left at all in this world for me.
    Darkness is what awaits me with open arms.
    I'm finally released from the light and free to rome the night.
    I'm finally alone and able to rest in peace....in the darkness of my own heart."....
    This I can relate to...Finally someone in this World understands how I feel I wrote something to someone I thought I loved...but it didn't work out so I wrote it for him...would you like to hear it? if not I don't really care...

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    Thank you for your comment May_Bloodrose_Pagan.Oh i'm sorry 2 hear that.And I would love 2 read what you wrote,so just pm me ok.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Thank you for your comment May_Bloodrose_Pagan.Oh i'm sorry 2 hear that.And I would love 2 read what you wrote,so just pm me ok.
    ...it's okay...Thoughts of Suicide


    Here I am again lost in the endless thoughts of you
    Thinking of why you have to go through all the pain that you do
    It's like your screams will never be heard
    Like you die more with every little word
    Reaching out but to find no touch
    Just thinking of all the pain is to much
    You watch yourself fade away
    Just waiting for the time of that day
    You know it's coming fast
    Because your body just won't last
    Your feel your body lose its soul
    Letting the dangers take hold
    Making you weak without a straight thought
    Knowing that you've lost the war that you fought
    Your face grows old one by one
    But you love the feeling of being numb
    When I look at you now it's not what it seems
    But you’re nothing like you where, or was it in my dreams
    Remembering the call I got when I wasn't home
    Nothing but tears fell over the phone
    Telling me your thoughts of suicide and how you wanted to die
    But the only thing I could do is cry
    I believe dreams come true
    But nightmares do to
    And this was there
    But all I could do was watch you die with despair
    With that sharp object in your hand getting ready to let go
    That night I watch the darkness take hold
    But when you left it touched another soul
    With the knife that you used, the knife that stole you
    It came to me and I could feel the cold blood run down my finger tips
    It was like a deadly poison was laid upon my lips
    It will steal your soul
    It will never let go
    You've faded away and you left me here to stay
    The empty spot you left will never feel
    My black shattered heart will never heal
    But my black soul tells me I'm the reason you wanted to die
    I'm your cause of suicide

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    You were my heaven and my heart, but I have nothing now thanks to you
    And now I’ll make you kill you.
    ...sorry it's kinda...you know...

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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    Re: Dark and Broken Heart

    Wow.....*is left speachless*....This is amazing!!!!! I so loved it!! It's filled with so much emotion and darkness!! Amazing!! Thank you for letting my read this.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shinigami's_Angel View Post
    Wow.....*is left speachless*....This is amazing!!!!! I so loved it!! It's filled with so much emotion and darkness!! Amazing!! Thank you for letting my read this.
    ...you liked it??...thanks...and your welcome??...*confused* your the first person who thought so...or thought I was good at anything...so...thanks for the compliment...*i'm an assassin/librarian/writer, but I was told not to be the writer part because my stuff was no good and too depressing...so this is new*

    Very Deeply Misunderstood

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