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    Dark Chains (Final Part #5)

    The watery eyes of your heart collapses into my feelings when i remember you

    The warmth of your words touch me to the bottom of my hopes that is good

    The way you try to forgive i try to choose you good but it has changed alot

    My feelings for you has a diffrerent meaning in my life that i chose to live

    My descision for you is to be in eternal darkness over you to protect you

    My life is meaninless if you let go off me until a realm of the shadow

    The life is ours is together and live for each other until we get lights of hope

    Our destiny is to be in the same pain not to treat me like a shadow

    I treat you my best of my love towards you but you just leave me alone.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    Re: Dark Chains (Final Part #5)

    Wow just as good as the others! I love this poem so much detail and I absolutely enjoyed it good job hope to see more!^^



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    These were wonderful and magnificent. I've never seen such a good combination of poems... You were fantastic and i want you to keep up the great work. Keep writing because i would love to see more.^_^

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    Re: Dark Chains (Final Part #5)

    Yah finally the last one! ^^ This is just heartbreaking really! It's a great poem but yet so sad! I enjoyed reading so I hope to see more new ones!
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