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    Dark Chains (pt.3 of 5)

    The moments i spent time with you the longest day i stayed with you

    The condition i lived for you i tried so hard to protect you and hold you

    The moments we were left alone in the darkness but you hold a chain on me

    The things you told me that you loved me all your heart but deceived me

    How can i forget that heart break out of you when you left me chained up

    How can i start fogiving you even if you loved me and stayed by my side

    How should i start making things easier for you after you betrayed me

    I still think about you all the time and never once i looked back over my past

    I still think we should have stayed with each other forever then breaking up

    I should be the one to be blamed for into spliting up and how much it hurts

    Me to be alone in the dakness.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    Re: Dark Chains (pt.3 of 5)

    Oh wow! Thats deep!!! ^^ I like it! It was just so interesting and so dark to me so yah dark1angel!!!!! *Cheers* I do hope to see more and I read the others just right now and it was so amazing!!!! ^^
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    Re: Dark Chains (pt.3 of 5)

    I agree.Very good.And as always great wording.So very emotional.Great job.Keep writing.I wanna read your next one.

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