Thread: Dark Corner

The poem was good. But to be honest I was distracted by my eyeballs straining. I dunno if its just my laptop.... But that font color against the gray background didn't work so well for me.

*edit: Good thing I can tilt my monitor... it made the blue stand out, and I could concentrate better. I love those feeling words you used here, No so much emotional, but the kind of words that bring forth fear and curiosity. Very nice poem indeed.

ahh thx ^^ i changed the font

^^ yup...not much emotional there...just showing the imagination in my head

RayMe another good poem! I really do like all of the detail of this one about the darkness. I kinda reminds me of my dark side.

ahh shucks... my poems aren't that good but ty ^^

wooh...darker side eh? ^^ well well...wear them black coats with the hoods
and walk with us in the dark parade.... u want the lightsaber too? red? or..
green? maybe...purple...

That sounds almost like a start to a good story instead of a poem. You may be able to work it that way if you wanted to. Ya know? Oh, by the way it was good.

Yup...im trying to make a scary story kind of novel ^^ so it kinda gave the idea of this poem... and thank you ^^

uh.. this is a nice poem and differ-*jumps, screams and runs when a shadow moved*