The poem was good. But to be honest I was distracted by my eyeballs straining. I dunno if its just my laptop.... But that font color against the gray background didn't work so well for me.
*edit: Good thing I can tilt my monitor... it made the blue stand out, and I could concentrate better. I love those feeling words you used here, No so much emotional, but the kind of words that bring forth fear and curiosity. Very nice poem indeed.