This is a great poem and it comes from the heart....Keep up the good work.
Ok this in my first poem ever that I actually
have placed for others to see, and about 5th poem
in my live so don't be so harsh, please ^_^
Dedicated to someone who means everything to me.
As days fade away
I walk in the valley,
trying to understand --
What happened on that day
when everything we knew,
everything that was told,
everything that was meant,
was meant to be,
meant to happen -- faded away.
On that day angels upon us
turned their backs to us.
On that day our friends, our true friends,
turned their backs to us.
What happened on that day -- and why?
I wonder -- why?
What there will be left,
what remains so that,
when the time comes we,
can, and will repair.
Will there be left the one seed
the one small seed, that is
always --
always --
protected by our hearts.
And when the time will come
that seed opens up and
shows everyone -
what broken by them,
was meant to be, meant to happen.
I truly love you forever. Thanks for giving me the strenght to
continue. Thanks my love, my dear friend, my cousin.
Last edited by NightFox; May 10, 2006 at 08:10 AM.
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
This is a great poem and it comes from the heart....Keep up the good work.
Thanks, I really appreciate when I someone tells me that way.
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
touching...but u luv ur cousin...um *mouth shuts* ignore tat...so yea it's a nc one...but somehow there's some grammer mistakes...rather spelling mistakes...
1- ment---> meant
2- allways---> always
3- dayour- day our...tat desnt really count but...
sry if u did wanted them to spell tat way. but yea...
Thanks for correcting my spelling, I was kinda tired and brains-> fingers sync didn't work.
No reason for you to shut your mouth, I can take the critic about that.
And FYI in Finland it's legal to marry 1st cousin.
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
nice poem! great job........................
They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.
wow that is really impressive
I love it alot keep it up![]()
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
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