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    Dark days

    Ok this in my first poem ever that I actually
    have placed for others to see, and about 5th poem
    in my live so don't be so harsh, please ^_^

    Dedicated to someone who means everything to me.


    As days fade away
    I walk in the valley,
    trying to understand --
    What happened on that day
    when everything we knew,
    everything that was told,
    everything that was meant,
    was meant to be,
    meant to happen -- faded away.

    On that day angels upon us
    turned their backs to us.
    On that day our friends, our true friends,
    turned their backs to us.

    What happened on that day -- and why?
    I wonder -- why?

    What there will be left,
    what remains so that,
    when the time comes we,
    can, and will repair.

    Will there be left the one seed
    the one small seed, that is
    always --
    always --
    protected by our hearts.

    And when the time will come
    that seed opens up and
    shows everyone -
    what broken by them,
    was meant to be, meant to happen.


    I truly love you forever. Thanks for giving me the strenght to
    continue. Thanks my love, my dear friend, my cousin.
    Last edited by NightFox; May 10, 2006 at 08:10 AM.


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    Re: Dark days

    This is a great poem and it comes from the heart....Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Dark days

    Thanks, I really appreciate when I someone tells me that way.


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    Re: Dark days

    touching...but u luv ur cousin...um *mouth shuts* ignore tat...so yea it's a nc one...but somehow there's some grammer mistakes...rather spelling mistakes...
    1- ment---> meant
    2- allways---> always
    3- dayour- day our...tat desnt really count but...
    sry if u did wanted them to spell tat way. but yea...

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    Re: Dark days

    Thanks for correcting my spelling, I was kinda tired and brains-> fingers sync didn't work.
    No reason for you to shut your mouth, I can take the critic about that.
    And FYI in Finland it's legal to marry 1st cousin.


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    Re: Dark days

    nice poem! great job........................

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    Re: Dark days

    wow that is really impressive

    I love it alot keep it up

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