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    Cool Dark Gardens

    Emotions find fragrance
    Emitting violet sensations
    Mindful synapses burst bloomed
    In dark gardens

    Under the moonlit trees
    Utterance is given to memories
    Anguished against grey shadows
    In dark gardens

    Sweet nectars slip my tongue
    Singing electric through impulses
    Voiced by my hands holding quill
    In dark gardens

    Compassion is an echo
    Cobalt blue on heartsome red
    Felt for feathered friends
    In dark gardens

    What is wrong is an end
    Wishing for refreshing newness
    Ley lines from this circling round
    In dark gardens

    Powerful disability mingles
    Maudlin on the end of dispairs
    Dreading the next violin
    In dark gardens

    Knowledge comes softly
    Kneeling on my furrowed brow
    Brandishing disharmonied hours
    In dark gardens

    Forlornly I walk amongst lillies
    Loving the essence of these strangers
    Straining to see into my valley
    Of dark gardens

    Whomsoever walks on this bower
    Borrows a spare part in time
    Thorns prick them there
    In dark gardens

    Peaceful ponderings pander
    For a few golden moments of magic
    Made by souls mixed and married
    In dark gardens.
    Your life means nothing to me.

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    Re: Dark Gardens

    wow this poem kicks ass man
    this piece just oozes darkness
    and the way you have made it into a
    romantic journey which
    is very cool.

    this poem is great
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Dark Gardens

    Very well done indeed.
    Allthough it is long, it brings a sense of imagnation into it. Well, in my opinion anyways.

    And, even though it was long, it kept my attention the whole way through.

    Nice!
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