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    The Dark Horse!



    Souls go through his nostrils like
    breath on a cold winters morning,
    the clattering of his hooves are like
    thunder in the distance, his speed
    is like the cold wind that paralyses
    your body on a harsh december
    day.

    As he stands on his hind leg's
    his nay sounds like million's
    dieing in pain all at once,
    as the rider smile's with drool
    on his skinless face salivates
    knowing you will be his soon.

    The gore ,the horror ,the smell
    of rotting flesh and entrails ,it a
    horrid delight for the damned
    tonight, only those who heed my warning
    will ever have there sole saved from this
    demise.


    ok this is my tribute to death and his
    horse and theose who thrive on the darkness
    happy hallween, and any comments or sugetions will
    be apreciated
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Dark Horse!

    absolutely....lovely poem chris. watever you load your pictures with screws up my computer, but this time it finnaly started working. the pic moves too fast.

    the poem was very graphic but i liked it.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: The Dark Horse!

    i load it with just my pc since image shack isnt needed anymore for AO
    and thank's for the comment i was more graphic since its halloween ,
    i still need work on some things but thanks for your comment it helps
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Dark Horse!

    if you have a PC then that explains the problem with pics, i got a MAC. at least i can load them now. the sigs you posted in the clan territory just have "?" instead of a picture.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: The Dark Horse!

    Wow that was really cool. You used that thing you made for me, that was neat!! I loved the darkness of it, keep up the great work!
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    Re: The Dark Horse!

    Wow pretty nice poem HolderOfTheDarkChalice. Did you get inspired to write this poem when you read the last book of the bible?

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    Re: The Dark Horse!

    not really but thats a cool concept though and im glad everyone liked it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Dark Horse!

    That was a good halloween poem. It was as dark and cold as it should've been for what you were talking about. keep it up and can't wait to read your next one.
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