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    Darkest da fearsful night

    Kill I wish they all were dead
    This screaming why the screaming won’t get out of my head?
    I cannot fell anymore because I’m lost I fought and lost
    And now I see it’s over my world is ending there’s no hope at all.

    Die why would they have to lie these thoughts of rage
    Make me wonder how know that I cannot Die at all.

    Destroy them all before and I laugh at the sight of
    Evilness and torture this one last word is all that’s herd
    And its unsure that I could ever care at all!




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    Re: Darkest da fearsful night

    This is a hateful poem but it is still good....Keep up the good work bro.

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    Re: Darkest da fearsful night

    Kinda angstic...
    Poem is nocely formed thou and the "line"
    keep up all the way to end, but still maybe too angstic.


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    Re: Darkest da fearsful night

    angstic? i have no clue what that word means.............but thanks for the comment I did this one straight no write down nothing all typed at the computer




    OH CRAP i just noticed that I spelled the topic wrong it's supposted to be darkest day fearsful night i wish i could change it......

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    Re: Darkest da fearsful night

    Angst~person who allways just yell to all that he/she wanna be dead, and world hates him/her etc.


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    Re: Darkest da fearsful night

    oooooooooh you think its about that? wow i guess i gotta take the way people read my peotry into perception too.............what it ment to me was If i have to get up someone is gonna die kinda like when you irritated and people keep messing wih you somthing like that.....

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