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Reply With QuoteThis is a hateful poem but it is still good....Keep up the good work bro.
Kill I wish they all were dead
This screaming why the screaming won’t get out of my head?
I cannot fell anymore because I’m lost I fought and lost
And now I see it’s over my world is ending there’s no hope at all.
Die why would they have to lie these thoughts of rage
Make me wonder how know that I cannot Die at all.
Destroy them all before and I laugh at the sight of
Evilness and torture this one last word is all that’s herd
And its unsure that I could ever care at all!
-Sage_sevon
Last edited by Sage_Se'von; May 15, 2006 at 06:55 AM.
I am a sage....the light of elements
This is a hateful poem but it is still good....Keep up the good work bro.
Kinda angstic...
Poem is nocely formed thou and the "line"
keep up all the way to end, but still maybe too angstic.
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
angstic? i have no clue what that word means.............but thanks for the comment I did this one straight no write down nothing all typed at the computer
OH CRAP i just noticed that I spelled the topic wrong it's supposted to be darkest day fearsful night i wish i could change it......
I am a sage....the light of elements
Angst~person who allways just yell to all that he/she wanna be dead, and world hates him/her etc.
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
oooooooooh you think its about that? wow i guess i gotta take the way people read my peotry into perception too.............what it ment to me was If i have to get up someone is gonna die kinda like when you irritated and people keep messing wih you somthing like that.....
I am a sage....the light of elements
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