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    darkness

    darkness dark at best
    light is lost
    a night of terror
    everlasting fate

    it's the beginning of the end
    or the end of the start
    midddle even
    darkness will it ever end

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    Re: darkness

    short and to the point did my avvy give you this idea? lol
    but it is very dark and i like how question if the end was the bigening
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: darkness

    hmm...
    it's short.
    but I like it.
    cool.
    I love you,so please don't love me.

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    Re: darkness

    Its short, but i don't mind that. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. It has a nice feel to it. ^ ^


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    Re: darkness

    i short but is nice and is my user name lol

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    Re: darkness

    No offense.. but this is like the 10th poem with this title that I've seen on the internet..

    Interesting twist on it though, you talk about the actual "darkness" as if it were a being or object.. as opposed to implying the darkness is there using darkened metaphors or Imagery.. differant indeed.
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    Re: darkness

    it's short, and that is a definate plus. i love it.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: darkness

    its short but I like it. Keep it up!!!
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