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Reply With Quoteshort and to the point did my avvy give you this idea? lol
but it is very dark and i like how question if the end was the bigening
darkness dark at best
light is lost
a night of terror
everlasting fate
it's the beginning of the end
or the end of the start
midddle even
darkness will it ever end
short and to the point did my avvy give you this idea? lol
but it is very dark and i like how question if the end was the bigening
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
hmm...
it's short.
but I like it.
cool.
I love you,so please don't love me.
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Its short, but i don't mind that. I especially enjoyed the last stanza. It has a nice feel to it. ^ ^
i short but is nice and is my user name lol
No offense.. but this is like the 10th poem with this title that I've seen on the internet..
Interesting twist on it though, you talk about the actual "darkness" as if it were a being or object.. as opposed to implying the darkness is there using darkened metaphors or Imagery.. differant indeed.
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it's short, and that is a definate plus. i love it.
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
its short but I like it. Keep it up!!!
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