It's cold, dark
A place so deep that light can not penatrate
My fears are closing in
The pain is growing, surrounding me I can't breath.
Someone help me please
Anyone, someone I can't feel my heart is broken
My wings have been torn
This pain is like the firey pits of hell
The angels I once saw are now devils.
This can't be heaven
Where am I, what is this place?
Why can't I feel
Who are you? Are you love?
Go away leave me be
I don't want to feel anymore
The sunny days are gone
Days of me loving you past the pain are gone
I can't be the man who loved you anymore.
Leave me Alone!
Let the roses that onced bloomed
Die and a lonely death
Feel no more love or happiness
This is the darkness I feel.
I just wrote this poem. It was something I was feeling, I'm not trying to ryhme just letting out the pain.
It was really good though... No doubt about it...
You can pass it all through... I suffered the things you are feeling now...
OMG!! That was soooo awesome Fox!!! You really did good on this poem.By useing the emotions that you were feeling while writting always makes the poem come 2 life more.Awesome job Fox! :)
Thanks Shinigami's Angel!!! Big Hugs :D I'm always trying to get better ya know!
that is GREAT! i feel exactly like that cuz of certain events that happened in my life and i just feel like that i wld never find the way out of the darkness im in
very awesome poem bro i have felt like this sevral times
and you express it well , your poems are getting better
i like this one alot
Hey Bro and Moon Goddess,
thanks for the support and I will try to keep them coming I been feeling like this a lot lately and I just need to let it all out! Hopefully this BlueFox won't disappoint!
Oh my that is a good poem. I really felt the emotions of it. Nice job and I'm sure your next one will be just as good as this one is.