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    darkness

    I gave you everything and expected nothing in return...
    But only you beside me,to love me,dri my tears,and never leave me.....
    You leaft without saying a word..
    Disapeared into the darkness leaveing me to suffer this alone....
    Wondering what I did wrong for you to leave...
    Now all I do is cry alone in th dark waiting for you to come back for me and dri these tears that riple down my face everyday since you left...
    I call out for you but only hear echo's...
    I hear your voice in my sleep...
    Wakeing to want to see you,But All I see is darkness All around me and tears fall one after another as I sit alone hearing only the echo's of my tears hitting the foor and me calling out to you....

    Hope yall like it I just wrote it last night
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    Re: darkness

    This is my favorite part.

    Quote Originally Posted by fredsboo View Post
    I hear your voice in my sleep...
    Wakeing to want to see you,But All I see is darkness All around me and tears fall one after another as I sit alone hearing only the echo's of my tears hitting the foor and me calling out to you....
    I get the kind of insomnia that wakes me up in the wee hours of the morning... when its still dark out...

    Often I cant sleep because my mind wakes up with thoughts of a certain someone...

    So, that part of the poem in particular, is the same feeling I get a 4:00am most nights.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: darkness

    well i hope you liked it lol sorry...........ummmmmbut thanks
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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