very nice i loved how you made this into a submissive poem
that's really dark and in someways appealing to those who
are into that stuff me personally would totally avoid that lol.
but the darkness really is a beautiful state of mind
the quietness the solidarity and confinment it can be
something that is hard to walk away from when your
so far away from the light , i find the pome really
awesome and your wording is great.
i cant wait to read another