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    Darkness

    Darkness falls.
    Creeping crawls.
    slithering walls.
    Darkness falls everyones dead.
    Crazy in there head.
    Darkness falls creeping crawls.
    slithering walls.
    Everyones dead.
    Crazy in the head.
    Everyones gone.

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    Re: Darkness

    Woah.... INSANE! I imagined it be sang, like some sort of nursery rhyme... Something like "ring around the rosie"... Only demented. I liked it, different from anything Ive seen, and would love to see more.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Darkness

    I like your poem. Although I also like the darkness. It does sound like a nursery rhmym like peach_follows says. Very good, can't wait to read more from you.

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    HEY!!! Their right!!! That's cool^^... i like it and can't wait to hear more^^

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    Re: Darkness

    Thank you all. I shall create more of this and post it later on.

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