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    The Darkness!

    Everything is new , born again is the
    day with a new sun everything is going
    your way , you smile so sweet thinking
    your on your feet the world is great , the sky so

    Then you wake up and the horror comes
    in to your window those lousy days and mornfull
    nights its all about you, never once do you think
    how things could be ,only when your down will you
    see that the light that you seek is in the darknes
    of me.

    The moon so full and the air so cool
    the moon feels the dark with suck light
    a tear falls from your cheek , no more will
    you sleep only when pain comes into your
    life will things become clear.

    You lay there stareing at the walls hoping
    things of your dreams were real , just wake up
    and realise that dreams are shadows that lie.

    Truth can be so shallow so why tell everyone your
    fine ,things become so clear when your a heart beat
    away from loosing it , you think begging some times
    helps when all it does is hender the real you.

    Look inside your mind and the dream will fade
    the darkness that out side will let you see what
    the light always hides .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Darkness!

    Wow that is true, sometimes in the darkness you will find what you seek, but you must remember there is happyniess in the light sometimes too, however bright it may seem, keep it up your poems are not pain their more you and you always have some darkside to ya. Keep it up man Love the poem
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    Re: The Darkness!

    very deep my friend some of us can only find peace in darkness and pain while others ned the light to survive it seems you are one of the former

    The brighter a light shines, the thicker the shadows fall

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    Re: The Darkness!

    Wow that started so nice then it turned so scary. I would never wanna have a day like that cause if I did I'd stay in bed with my head covered up or hide in the closet. I don't know how long it took you to come up with this,but it is very good. Great job.
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