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    Darkness(this is a boring poem)

    I feel alone,
    Darkness looms high above.
    Fear manifests as worry,
    I need love.
    I want control,
    Someone try to save me.
    How I want them to succeed,
    I need them to.
    I cause nothing but pain,
    I'm sorry.

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    Re: Darkness(this is a boring poem)

    I love the word manifest. Nice use of it too. Good job.
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