Darkness(this is a boring poem)

!flaminghate · Feb 18, 2007, 12:32 AM

I feel alone,
Darkness looms high above.
Fear manifests as worry,
I need love.
I want control,
Someone try to save me.
How I want them to succeed,
I need them to.
I cause nothing but pain,
I'm sorry.

*Kasai* · Feb 18, 2007, 05:17 AM

I love the word manifest. Nice use of it too. Good job.

Feb 18, 2007, 12:32 AM	#1 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Darkness(this is a boring poem) I feel alone, Darkness looms high above. Fear manifests as worry, I need love. I want control, Someone try to save me. How I want them to succeed, I need them to. I cause nothing but pain, I'm sorry.
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: Darkness(this is a boring poem) I love the word manifest. Nice use of it too. Good job. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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