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    The Darkness In A Heart

    The darkness in my heart making me fade away into an endless abyss.
    My love for him love is much of a-miss
    A tender kiss so given by hate.
    So much like my very first date.
    A flower for you and a red red rose for me.
    Don't just stand around let me be.
    The convenin closing the world goes dark.
    Cerberous stops his bark.
    A full blood moon.
    As he crawls back into his sand dune.
    A broken heart full of pain
    His love for me was so insane
    I love him with all my heart and soul
    To find him is my only goal
    To hold him my arms once more
    Not having him by me is such a bore
    Two hearts beating as one
    All my wounds have come undone.
    His arms are my castle and his heart is my sky.
    And i never want to tell him good bye.
    The darkness in one's heart can never fade away.
    But darkness in his heart stays at bay.
    My love for him so strong as the light.
    A gentle nibble and bite
    Blood slowly falling off our necks.
    Everyone falls and hits the deck.
    The darkness in a heart forever more
    To hold his hand in mine as we fade away from the world who cares nothing of us creatures of the night
    Our love so strong to destroy The Darkness In A Heart.......



    lol i just made this up cuz i was thining of someone special to me..hopefully he reads this and smiles forever ~In Loving Memory Of My Cousin Irma~thank u for always watching out for me..i'm sorry i wasnt there to save ur life from that crash........
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: The Darkness In A Heart

    that good on the spot thinking i wish i could write like
    that . and just may leave him speech less. you have such talent here
    do stop keep them coming.

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    Re: The Darkness In A Heart

    So sad!!!!! So great! I really do love the sadness in this poem! It's just so perfect really! Great poem and awesome as well!!!!! I do hope to see more!
    Last edited by KuwiRules145; Aug 03, 2007 at 11:42 AM.
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    Re: The Darkness In A Heart

    Quote Originally Posted by chrystalann2004 View Post
    that good on the spot thinking i wish i could write like
    that . and just may leave him speech less. you have so talent here
    do stop keep them coming.
    wow thank u very much i have more poems but not with me at this moment they are at my house lol and im not at home im kinda at skool
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: The Darkness In A Heart

    I love reading your poetry, it's so perfect lol As soon as I can find one I'll put it on here. That or write some new ones lol which ever happens first lol
    Alawys look on the bright side...of death! Life is a piece of sh!t...


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    Quote Originally Posted by Armadio2 View Post
    I love reading your poetry, it's so perfect lol As soon as I can find one I'll put it on here. That or write some new ones lol which ever happens first lol
    lol and theres other things u like to read that i write to dont forget that..lmao (sorry folks inside joke) just think of new ones makes it better so i can try to out do u lol jk
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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