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    Darkness poem

    I cant see u can u see me.
    I live with in the darkness were nobody would ever want to be.
    The darkness is near.
    You cant touch it.
    You cant feel it.
    The way the darkness moves throw ur body.
    You cry out for but no ones there.
    You feel alound.
    Nobody by ur side.
    But one that can feel the darkness.
    Is along by ur side.
    For ever.







    I may not be a pro but i hope u like it.

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    Re: Darkness poem

    I liked it!

    Check your spellings though becuase it made it a bit difficult for it to flow, but it really is a good poem..

    A little depressing but that makes it deeper..

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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