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    Daughter's Love

    Hush little baby
    Everything will be all right
    Mother is here for you
    She will keep you safe at night.

    She cheris you like a gift
    You are the only one she ever love
    Mother always thinks about you
    As an angel from above.

    One day you'll grew up
    To be sweet and kind
    Yet so beautiful
    You will never leave your mother behind.

    Sometimes you will remember
    Never to forget your mother
    You always know
    That she is the best of no other.

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    Re: Daughter's Love

    hmmm a well written poem there.... i enjoyed it alot... nice work!
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    Re: Daughter's Love

    This is such a sweet poem about mothers. I know that when I become a mother I'm gonna feel the exact same way about my children. I look forward to reading more.
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    It's a sweet poem, but the whole them of the mother theme I don't like. For reasons of my own, I don't like mother or father related things. I don't know mine well, but what I do know I don't like. But non the less is does express how a child, for some reason, will almost always love their mother.

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    Re: Daughter's Love

    LOL, Love you too DS, well I tried to not come up with a relation thing going but I couldn't find or write it, so this is how I came up with.

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    Re: Daughter's Love

    I really liked this poem hellknight. It was cute and sweet. Keep up the good work.
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    Re: Daughter's Love

    Thanks Ky, and your not so bad with your work as well, your poems I like better.

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    I was doing a reversion of this poem do you want to hear when I'm done?
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