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Reply With Quote*snifles* so sad....anyways good job on this poem so good emotional and well keep it up
That day that
You died
I felt that
I died with you
I stood at your grave
Looking at your face
Thinking why would you
Leave me all alone
Now I walk away
It starts to rain
I start to cry
I miss you so much.....
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Yet again another true one.....*sigh*
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"Because it's okay to hide your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)
*snifles* so sad....anyways good job on this poem so good emotional and well keep it up
Yeah, Bye.
Beautiful but sad its very good keep up the work and I hope to hear more from you!!
Made by mi amigo Mveli2
Thank you all very much I appreciate all your comments! I tried really hard and I'm glad all of you like it!^^
Phantasmagoria Lives On In The Hearts Of Their Fans, Japanese AND English!
"Because it's okay to hide your tears." - LM.C (Lovely Mocochang)
Wow you deserve good coments you are really good.
and even though the poem is short it had alot of amotions in it.
well keep it up and hope to see more.
Originally Posted by Akura13
waz a beautiful poem.!!! but sad(
anyway, great poem.
AWESOME POEM AKURA!!!!!!!!!! This was just so great but sad so WAH!!!!!!! But thats just makes it amazing!!!!! So great job! I hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Great poem!^^ it could have been alittle longer though. but its still good and pretty sad. i liked it.^^
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