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    That Day.....

    That day that
    You died
    I felt that
    I died with you

    I stood at your grave
    Looking at your face
    Thinking why would you
    Leave me all alone

    Now I walk away
    It starts to rain
    I start to cry
    I miss you so much.....
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    Yet again another true one.....*sigh*



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    Re: That Day.....

    *snifles* so sad....anyways good job on this poem so good emotional and well keep it up
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Beautiful but sad its very good keep up the work and I hope to hear more from you!!

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    Thank you all very much I appreciate all your comments! I tried really hard and I'm glad all of you like it!^^



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    Re: That Day.....

    Wow you deserve good coments you are really good.
    and even though the poem is short it had alot of amotions in it.
    well keep it up and hope to see more.

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    Re: That Day.....

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    That day that
    You died
    I felt that
    I died with you

    I stood at your grave
    Looking at your face
    Thinking why would you
    Leave me all alone

    Now I walk away
    It starts to rain
    I start to cry
    I miss you so much.....
    ____________________
    Yet again another true one.....*sigh*

    waz a beautiful poem.!!! but sad(
    anyway, great poem.

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    Re: That Day.....

    AWESOME POEM AKURA!!!!!!!!!! This was just so great but sad so WAH!!!!!!! But thats just makes it amazing!!!!! So great job! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Great poem!^^ it could have been alittle longer though. but its still good and pretty sad. i liked it.^^

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