A day goes by.
A day goes by,
The world one day older,
So am I.
In a world that ages every day,
How do you live life?
Live life to the fullest,
For you never know,
When you will no longer see another day go by.
My life is my own. You can't control me.
I am like a sword get to close and you'll get hurt.
I have very bad spelling. Expect some spelling mistakes.
you have a good idea for the poem but this needs more detail. a little revising will do the trick. you can make this one great!
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^