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    days and nights

    The days go by so slow.
    As for the nights,
    they dont want to end.
    As the nights go on ,
    you still can't sleep.
    All you can do is stare at the wall.
    While waiting for the time to pass.
    By the time you fall a sleep
    you have to get up again,
    and you say ahh hell and
    here we go again.
    Someone please bring me a cup of coffee, I asked.
    But you think to yourself 1 cup won't cut it,
    but maybe 5 will do.
    Now you are wired for the day,
    and you can stay still.
    Your head is killing and your eyes are pulsing.
    You want to lay down to stop to room from spinning.
    Finally you are out for few hours.
    When you wake again,
    you have huge headache.

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    Re: days and nights

    That was nice, but no rhytem to it, but a good poem is a good poem and I say this is a good poem including the ending lol, keep it up and I'll be looking forward to your next poem.

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    Re: days and nights

    Great poem Chrystalann describes days and nights to a T yes?
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    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    That was nice, but no rhytem to it, but a good poem is a good poem and I say this is a good poem including the ending lol, keep it up and I'll be looking forward to your next poem.
    thank you for feed back
    glad you like it thanks again

    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    That was nice, but no rhytem to it, but a good poem is a good poem and I say this is a good poem including the ending lol, keep it up and I'll be looking forward to your next poem.
    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    Great poem Chrystalann describes days and nights to a T yes?
    yea i guess it dose. but it on of my best one though
    Last edited by Hassun; Sep 27, 2007 at 03:02 PM. Reason: Double Posting.

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    Re: days and nights

    your welcome chrystalann it is and watch your double posts there.
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    Smile Re: days and nights

    ya i agree nice poem! except when i wake i want to see the sun BURN!!!...oh well.

    And i liked the way it didn't rhyme almost every poem rhymes but i like to read the ones that don't either

    keep it ups!

    -zainab

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    Re: days and nights

    thank i am glad you like it
    and thank for your feed back

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    Re: days and nights

    sounds like a nightmare kind of life.. but i like the night life more.. would be better if my gf is next to me every night.. *sighs* ^^

    nice poem.. keep up the good work..and the rhythm thingy.. u wil slowly learn how to... just practice ^^

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