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    Every day i seem to forget,
    that i always end up feeling dead.
    I give the joy chance,
    but it never ever lasts.
    Every night i realize,
    that i just wish to die.
    I just wish to fade away,
    to take away this pain.
    I just want to disappear,
    being alive is what i fear.

    I just don't want to live anymore...
    everything seems so worthless,
    hypocrite and vain.
    Nothing worths a breath to me no more,
    i just want to run away,
    i feel so weak, like i can't take this pain,
    to be stranded,
    forgotten,
    left behind,
    i cannot stay in here another night,
    everything ends up in a tragedy or a fight.

    Time pass me by,
    cannot help but too cry.
    I realize this is time,
    time for me to die.
    I gave two shots to my head,
    and finally once in my life,
    i truly smiled...
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: dead

    o.o i really like this poem??? is that how yu always feel or was is on the spurr of the moment??? but for real i am being forced from every thing i know and love and that is how i feel rite now... i just want to die....but for real....i like it and if i were yuu i would not change a thing about it
    there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...

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    Hmm. Gimme some metaphors or something. I want to see your feelings. Visualization is one of the keys of memorization. Maybe I would actually remember who wrote this poem?
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    Omg!!! Wow,this was soooo awesome KuRuMi!! I so loved this poem that you wrote! The emotions in this poem were very strong and I could so relate 2 this as well,since i've felt like this before. But it was truly awesome though.Awesome job KuRuMi!
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    thank u all. mmm... i'm sorry if i didn't put any metaphors or something like that, i wasn't thinking what i was writing, i just wrote the way i felt... i'll do best next time, thanks for the critic i apreciate it, it will help me to write better (:
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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