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    Dead in Winter

    I don't know if you guys will think this one is any good...It's kind of different from my others, and a bit shorter...Tell me what you think.

    Dead In Winter-

    Dreaming of you in winter
    Searching for me
    Calling my name
    Your voice grew hoarse
    Your body ached
    The snow was falling
    Lost without a trace
    But I was there
    The last place you would ever look
    Under the oak tree
    Leaves were gone
    Bare and dead
    My body shivering in the cold
    Day was fading fast
    You gave up
    And left me there
    Now I’m so alone
    But hope is still inside me
    Inside this battered soul
    Maybe one day my warmth will return
    And come to melt this snow

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    Re: Dead in Winter

    i like it, sounds like someone is waiting someone special and give them hope, really good, keep it going

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    Re: Dead in Winter

    A classic love and lost poem my favorite kind, keep it coming.
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