I seemed to feel something similar for when I write my poetry when reading yours at the moment. Though there were some incoherencies I think with the title. I have difficulty to understand the final paragraph...maybe it's because I just woke up too ^.^
The rhyming seemed to flow pretty well, but I think that in todays standards, it is no longer necessary and I feel that you loose meaning in what you write unless you truly use the word you were searching for.
All in all, your story and poetry has evolved compared to what I first read from you, and all I can say is: keep up the good work and motivation of writing on XD