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    Dear friend.

    I wanted to leave everything.
    I wanted to up and run.
    But you just wouldn't let me.
    You essentially pinned me down.

    Though my heart is aching
    And always feels like breaking
    As long as I know your by my side
    I can at least pretend I was strong.

    Because dear friend without you
    I'd be lost and feeling oh so blue.
    You cheer me up and make me smile
    Even if sometimes it's only a little while.

    Before the tears start flowing
    Because my mind is going
    Quickly down the drain.
    But I know with you helping me look
    I'll find it again.

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    Re: Dear friend.

    This is so cute, it really is special how you two can love eachother no matter what. (no sarcasm what so ever)
    Must be a strong bond. To me, you're the most blessed woman alive.

    I just wish that a rose for you, wasn't a bullet for me.
    Stupid bullet... if its gonna hurt me... I wish it'd finish the job.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Dear friend.

    Another excellent one! I enjoyed reading it! It's sad yet romantic at the same time I loved it wonderful job hope to see more!^^



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    Re: Dear friend.

    I thought this was a very unique and romantic poem.

    It also had great form and really showed how you care for him.


    Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!

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    Re: Dear friend.

    Wow! Thank you all for your great responces! I've been feeling weird about my writing lately and I'm glad it isn't as bad as I thought.

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    Re: Dear friend.

    Very nicely written, Chan. I like this poem alot. It's good to know that you think I'm a good friend. I appreciate it. ^_^


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