I wanted to leave everything.
I wanted to up and run.
But you just wouldn't let me.
You essentially pinned me down.
Though my heart is aching
And always feels like breaking
As long as I know your by my side
I can at least pretend I was strong.
Because dear friend without you
I'd be lost and feeling oh so blue.
You cheer me up and make me smile
Even if sometimes it's only a little while.
Before the tears start flowing
Because my mind is going
Quickly down the drain.
But I know with you helping me look
I'll find it again.
This is so cute, it really is special how you two can love eachother no matter what. (no sarcasm what so ever)
Must be a strong bond. To me, you're the most blessed woman alive.
I just wish that a rose for you, wasn't a bullet for me.
Stupid bullet... if its gonna hurt me... I wish it'd finish the job.
... Not Ever Again...
Another excellent one! I enjoyed reading it! It's sad yet romantic at the same time I loved it wonderful job hope to see more!^^
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I thought this was a very unique and romantic poem.
It also had great form and really showed how you care for him.
Thanks to _gwenibe_ for this awesome sig!
Wow! Thank you all for your great responces!I've been feeling weird about my writing lately and I'm glad it isn't as bad as I thought.
Very nicely written, Chan. I like this poem alot. It's good to know that you think I'm a good friend. I appreciate it. ^_^
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