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    Dear God

    Dear God:

    Can you please tell me why
    this hurts so bad? Why nothing
    ever goes right for me?

    Could you explain to me why,
    no matter how hard I try, nothing
    ever seems to go right?

    Have I committed too many sins?
    Is it because I don't attend church?
    Why must I suffer? I thought I was
    a good person...

    Please, God.
    Please, tell me why I'm dealt so
    much pain. Help me understand why
    I must face perpetural tribulation.

    Tell me why you forbid me to have her!
    Break it down to me like I'm a child...

    Why am I forced to go without her?
    Why do you throw us hurdles that are
    impossible to jump over??

    Why must I be treated like the
    black-sheep of all your creations?

    Why did you put me here, only to
    let me be subject to pain and depression?
    People say you have a weird sense of
    humor, but I didn't know they meant "sick"...


    Just let me curl up and die...


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    Re: Dear God

    @.@ umm my... this is a poem with high negative energy...

    I believe it's called as.. life and tests... ^^

    Nicely done... i love the flow to this poem... ^^

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    Re: Dear God

    I agree with ray there is alot of "Negative Chi" as you once told it to me. but the flow is fast and good keep up the work I am sure you will find your answers. keep it up my friend.
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    Re: Dear God

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    @.@ umm my... this is a poem with high negative energy...

    I believe it's called as.. life and tests... ^^

    Nicely done... i love the flow to this poem... ^^
    Thanks, Ray. I'm glad you liked it. I couldn't help myself when I wrote this one. I'm pretty much at my breaking point here. I may have to stop writing for a while.

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    I agree with ray there is alot of "Negative Chi" as you once told it to me. but the flow is fast and good keep up the work I am sure you will find your answers. keep it up my friend.
    It's good to know that someone heeds my words (speaking of the negative chi). Thanks! ^_^ I appreciate your comment as well, it's good to know you like my work.


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    Re: Dear God

    And I will no matter its moods (if you know what I mean)
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    Re: Dear God

    Sad and depresing, i like how you put words together, very creative, people seem so depressed latley! Its kind of confusing to me. but oh well. great job keep it up!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Dear God

    Quote Originally Posted by highteckdudu View Post
    Sad and depresing, i like how you put words together, very creative, people seem so depressed latley! Its kind of confusing to me. but oh well. great job keep it up!
    I swear it must be contagious. Everyone's goin' through some s*** it seems. Anywho, thanks for your comment and I appreciate your support.


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    Re: Dear God

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    I swear it must be contagious. Everyone's goin' through some s*** it seems. Anywho, thanks for your comment and I appreciate your support.
    yes pain is contagious as well as happiness, hell any mood is contagious.
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