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Wow That was Awesome!!!!
You should give me some tips sometime.
"I'm holding back from hitting you."
Go ahead, I dare you
hit me, kick me
I dare you,
come on, you've already held me
by my throat against my own wall
you've held my head, and almost squeezed my brain out
I cannot stand it!
I cannot!
I hate living under this roof
i hate having to deal with his dictatorship
you always say you don't wanna hit me
but somehow you always do
so I'm waiting, waiting for the moment,
for when you hit me, I'll hit back!
XXXX YOU I DON'T CARE!
Even if I end up against the ground unconscious, or dead
I'll be happy, I fought back
I defended myself, because of the right thing
Unconscious or dead
yes dead, I don't mind being dead
nor do I mind being unconscious
But I do mind,
having my dignity and my honor taking from me
I do mind, you defending your lil angels, who are XXXXXing lil devils!
I'm waiting, patiently waiting
I know that day is coming soon, then after that....
She'll ask you to leave
I pray she does, becuz after that day, its you, or its me
but oyu have her wrapped around your finger
but remember, I came out of her
All that I've endured for 10 years will crumble under your feet
you'll feel a million times worse
and then you'll live with that curse
But Like I said, I ain't goin out w/o a fight
Alejandro Reyna I want you out of my life!
Last edited by jaderabbit; Jul 07, 2006 at 07:39 AM.
You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.
http://kuv319.tumblr.com/
There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
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Wow That was Awesome!!!!
You should give me some tips sometime.
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
I like it. I have similar feelings to my own stepfather, but different type of problem.........
♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
Errr..... Of all the poems I've read in AO, I think yours the most unique.... Funny I said that, but it's true.. I think this poem is expressing a child's anger towards his father or stepfather(I dunno) for abusing the child. The child want his mother to leave his father for that... Maybe this poem is about a child thirst for love. I'm not that sure, but that's a nice poem^^
Carve an amble now,
Saying that the day's still bright,
And let's play with time.
Interesting....... But don't you think it's a bit negative? Using vulgar slang is not nice..... You have to agree with me..Originally Posted by Adarrah
It's the poem expression.... duh....
Carve an amble now,
Saying that the day's still bright,
And let's play with time.
thanx guys for all teh comments, but the poem was written to express my anger, and Adarrah, you're actually right, heh, its about my step father.... heh.... thanx guys
You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.
http://kuv319.tumblr.com/
There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
Wow You must really Hate him that much well anyway It's still Great.
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
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