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    Dear Stepfather

    "I'm holding back from hitting you."
    Go ahead, I dare you
    hit me, kick me
    I dare you,
    come on, you've already held me
    by my throat against my own wall
    you've held my head, and almost squeezed my brain out
    I cannot stand it!
    I cannot!
    I hate living under this roof
    i hate having to deal with his dictatorship
    you always say you don't wanna hit me
    but somehow you always do
    so I'm waiting, waiting for the moment,
    for when you hit me, I'll hit back!
    XXXX YOU I DON'T CARE!
    Even if I end up against the ground unconscious, or dead
    I'll be happy, I fought back
    I defended myself, because of the right thing
    Unconscious or dead
    yes dead, I don't mind being dead
    nor do I mind being unconscious
    But I do mind,
    having my dignity and my honor taking from me
    I do mind, you defending your lil angels, who are XXXXXing lil devils!
    I'm waiting, patiently waiting
    I know that day is coming soon, then after that....
    She'll ask you to leave
    I pray she does, becuz after that day, its you, or its me
    but oyu have her wrapped around your finger
    but remember, I came out of her
    All that I've endured for 10 years will crumble under your feet
    you'll feel a million times worse
    and then you'll live with that curse
    But Like I said, I ain't goin out w/o a fight
    Alejandro Reyna I want you out of my life!
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    Re: Dear Stepfather

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    Wow That was Awesome!!!!

    You should give me some tips sometime.

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    Re: Dear Stepfather

    I like it. I have similar feelings to my own stepfather, but different type of problem.........
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    Re: Dear Stepfather

    Errr..... Of all the poems I've read in AO, I think yours the most unique.... Funny I said that, but it's true.. I think this poem is expressing a child's anger towards his father or stepfather(I dunno) for abusing the child. The child want his mother to leave his father for that... Maybe this poem is about a child thirst for love. I'm not that sure, but that's a nice poem^^
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Dear Stepfather

    Quote Originally Posted by Adarrah
    Errr..... Of all the poems I've read in AO, I think yours the most unique.... Funny I said that, but it's true.. I think this poem is expressing a child's anger towards his father or stepfather(I dunno) for abusing the child. The child want his mother to leave his father for that... Maybe this poem is about a child thirst for love. I'm not that sure, but that's a nice poem^^
    Interesting....... But don't you think it's a bit negative? Using vulgar slang is not nice..... You have to agree with me..

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    Re: Dear Stepfather

    It's the poem expression.... duh....
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Dear Stepfather

    thanx guys for all teh comments, but the poem was written to express my anger, and Adarrah, you're actually right, heh, its about my step father.... heh.... thanx guys
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    Re: Dear Stepfather

    Quote Originally Posted by N.Y._Soulja
    thanx guys for all teh comments, but the poem was written to express my anger, and Adarrah, you're actually right, heh, its about my step father.... heh.... thanx guys
    Wow You must really Hate him that much well anyway It's still Great.

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