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    Death

    Death has no number for me
    Death lets me run a course
    Death has left me a place
    A place by his side
    A place that he has a tasted for
    A place of pain
    A place, were I’m doing part of his job
    “PAIN!!!!!!!!!”
    Pain that he loves to see
    Pain of the broken hearts
    But death cannot give me that name “pain”
    But gives me a gifted to hold those broken hearts
    With a name he passes as well
    He said “The name that hold you’re gifted, the name that hurts them all and the name you fear”
    Death stands there and smiles
    The smile that can kill us all
    The name that he gave me, is a name that must not be
    He called me “Angel”
    But that was only half of it
    “ANGEL OF BROKEN HEARTS” he gave me

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    Re: Death

    The repitition doesnt suit this poem in my opinion.
    Seduced by Flesh


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