Death is what most people dread
I on the other hand ....
for when your dead everything stops!
it all gose away
for most it cause great sorrow
i've felt this once,
but no more!
I would like to leave this world
and all it's death and decay which....
lies beneth those wounderful
colors people hold so dear!
I've been thinking the same but it wont be good if we die early though...
we need 2 be in them grave...and feel the wrath of loneliness 10 times worse.. sigh...
Go man~! spread ur propaganda~!! :woohoo:
lol I make poems so that people can understand,
well most people that understand lol
well thanks for the comment.
you are welcome...man im at almost every of your poem..am i some kind of ur fan? :eek: @.@
my 2and favorite topic death!!!!!!!!
the pain , despair, hardship it all makes
you feel alive and its true that most people
only see the top layer the smiles, memories
freindship everything that makes life worth
but no one really thinks about it but you feel
most alive when your seconds from death and everything
blurs right before you pass the tree's the air you breath
everyhtig just seems much more than it really was.
very awesome poem