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    Death

    death, it just isn't fair,
    when it comes,
    for someone, you care,
    tearing them from your life, over night,
    leaving the living, with no fight, left for
    life.
    don't despair, although death, is always
    there, so is faith, and hope,
    both of those
    will help you cope, when death comes
    knocking at your door.
    so don't fear death,
    look it in the eye, and don't ask
    why, for death, completes the circle of
    life.

    HOW DO YOU THINK IN THAT ?......Oo....

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    Re: Death

    i think death has its reason for being constant
    becuase if there is no death life would never have
    a reason to struggle and to thrive as much as it
    does , take a simple flower if it never died even
    when plucked it would become dull and indifferent
    and never want to bloom to its full potential so
    it would look so beatifull.

    death is the reason things in life look so
    amazing and why every thing even us as humans
    sometimes live like today could be our last this poem
    is really amazing i love it, great poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Death

    oh my god how sad did that rlly happen to u because its a good poem but really sad...

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    thank you both of you (fallenangel25 ,HolderOfTheDarkChalice) for replay to the poem.....

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    Re: Death

    your poem was touching and to the point, and I think with a little help you will be a great writter some day if thats what you want to do. I cannot wait to read your next one. I hope to wach you grow. Thank you for shareing that with me.

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    Re: Death

    Yea. Death is just apart of life, without death life would be meaning less. Death has its part in narture the same way life has its part.

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    Re: Death

    I just adore this poem... so true- it tells everything I think about death!!!!!
    A good work xxoxx!!!!! long enough and everything...

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