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    Death

    When death comes my way, there will be nothing left to say. Death comes so fast,we forget...our past. Will you go to heaven or hell?, theres no way to tell. Sadness and deppression, are they to question?They say there is no gain, without pain. If this is true,why am I so blue...When death comes my way,ill lead the stray.

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    Re: Death

    Wow!!!!! This is such a truthful poem to me!!! It was so amazing cause everything seem like the truth to what to do well to me but great poem! Hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Death

    oh wow. It was awesome.
    I thought that when you typed it you could have made in poem format with stanzas but other than that the poems message was really great.
    love it.!

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    Re: Death

    i was originally going to do stanzas, but my psp wont let me,srry..thanks for the great replies. this was my first poem on this site,next one should be soon.

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    ah its pretty good. needs a little more to it. but dont get me wrong its better than me.lol

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    Re: Death

    thats a really good poem and it explains life so very well

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    Re: Death

    nice one ...this poem show me how the death come in easy way ...
    like it ...keep up ..see more for m you ...

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    I loved it, and you have shuch a good way with words I hope to see more form you soon.You have such a good talent.

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