" what is death to most it is the end of everything to some it is a way to make the problem called life go away but to others that thing called death is the only thing that can make them truelly happy"
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" what is death to most it is the end of everything to some it is a way to make the problem called life go away but to others that thing called death is the only thing that can make them truelly happy"
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Originally Posted by runebearer00
wow that is a tough subject to write about but it is simply amazing!!. i like it alot. plus death is a good topic if u can nail it and u did! good job:2thumbs:
Very nice poem!! I love it! It describes how death is to many diffrent people! Very nice job!! :D:
I wouldn't really consider this a poem. Perhaps elaborating on the topic and adding some punctuation and stanzas.
Simplicity is good but merely stating the obvious in a single line isn't good enough.
Better luck next time.