Thread: Death

Oh my gosh I love this! It's scary but It's very nice discribing words! Keep it up I hope to see more!^^

it is a good poem, but is it not a bit morbid?
I mean there seems to be so much life to you, why would you write a poem about death? just curios.
but it is very good so I tip my hat to you.

Oo... I like that! The whole being scared of death and at a certian point switching up and seeking it. I can identify with that, with my torn self. I often wish I was...dead nothingness in the height of my depression. But one of my biggest fears is death. So most of the time I run from him, but sometimes I beg him to come. Kudos!

Thank you very much for your comments. I wrote this after listening to some songs ,and I really didn't think to much about this one. I tweaked it abit to make it sound right.