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    Death

    Death is coming
    Crawling smiling
    Calling r your name
    Death is calling
    Crawling coming
    Laughing at your shame
    Death has come Death has won
    Now you die in shame
    Death is calling now your crawling
    Crawling after him.

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    Re: Death

    Oh my gosh I love this! It's scary but It's very nice discribing words! Keep it up I hope to see more!^^



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    Re: Death

    it is a good poem, but is it not a bit morbid?
    I mean there seems to be so much life to you, why would you write a poem about death? just curios.
    but it is very good so I tip my hat to you.

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    Re: Death

    Oo... I like that! The whole being scared of death and at a certian point switching up and seeking it. I can identify with that, with my torn self. I often wish I was...dead nothingness in the height of my depression. But one of my biggest fears is death. So most of the time I run from him, but sometimes I beg him to come. Kudos!

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    Re: Death

    Thank you very much for your comments. I wrote this after listening to some songs ,and I really didn't think to much about this one. I tweaked it abit to make it sound right.

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