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    Death

    A shadowy figure dressed in black robes
    He bears a banner of a white rose.
    He walks among us, scythe in hand
    Leaving behind dark, decrepit sand.

    He has a list that bears our names
    To him good and evil seems the same.
    When we die, he does his job
    By taking us to where we belong.

    Graves pile up like towers
    But others leave behind flowers.
    He takes us like a theift
    Because he is the opposite of life, for he is Death.
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    Re: Death

    Wow what a nice little poem about the grim reaper! It was a little on the scary side but that's what I liked about it! Good job hope to see more!^^



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    Re: Death

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    Wow what a nice little poem about the grim reaper! It was a little on the scary side but that's what I liked about it! Good job hope to see more!^^
    Thank you very much but death, and I mean death in itself not the earthly death can be very scary indeed

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    Re: Death

    death can be anything it is around us
    always never wavering from its faith in us
    to meet him your poem really is cool and
    the subject is great , and death truly
    is something that cant be held to one
    idealism
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Death

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    death can be anything it is around us
    always never wavering from its faith in us
    to meet him your poem really is cool and
    the subject is great , and death truly
    is something that cant be held to one
    idealism
    that is very true...death is always around us and it is inevitable...except for those of us who are already dead

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    Re: Death

    this is probably the best poem I have ever read about the grim reaper
    I'll get you!! I'll get you all!! even if it's the last thing I do!!"We Must Bow to the Inevitable"

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    Re: Death

    Quote Originally Posted by Anton View Post
    this is probably the best poem I have ever read about the grim reaper
    thank you, but do you just look for all the stuff I write so you can comment on it or something??

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    Re: Death

    thats a vary gd poem.i never really have read a poem about the grim reaper
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m open
    And I don’t feel like I am strong enough
    ‘Cause I’m broken when I’m lonesome
    And I don’t feel light when you’re gone away

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