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  1. Sep 26, 2007 09:18 PM #1
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    Death

    Death is around us,
    We can't escape,
    For we are destined for death.

    Pain of this is slow and horrible,
    It will last forever,
    And I will understand the meaning of death.

    The Grimm Reaper is waiting for me,
    And the fallen angels too,
    I can't escape...

    Fallen angels destined to fly,
    Broken and crazy,
    But too strong to cry...
    Darkness is my true light.
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  2. Sep 27, 2007 04:14 AM #2
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    Re: Death

    Very good, very good..... It has a good point, we all die, in one way or another.. Anyway good poem
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    now this poem i like it's like me wanting to die...right now.....*dodges a knife*.... I agree with Alucard we have to die now or some other time....depends


    anyways nice poem

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  4. Sep 27, 2007 10:41 AM #4
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    Re: Death

    i agree good poem, but i'm disappointed much. It feels like the person in the poem, or you, has given up on living and is just waiting to die. Sure hope that's not the case.

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  5. Sep 29, 2007 01:18 AM #5
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    Re: Death

    yea... i agree with alucard and zyta.. hmm ...

    A good poem.. ^^ keep up the good work..
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    Re: Death

    I love it!!!!!
    Dark and creepy........my favorite!!!
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