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    Talking Death (I made this out of boredom)

    Life has driven me to the great abyss.
    the only wish of deaths kiss.

    Dragging me by my life.
    digging into my heart with a knife.

    The bloody Honor and cruel deceit.
    the brutal taste of the great defeat.

    Living to deaths love.
    The bloody death of the dove.

    The rich life of death.
    Breathing your very last breath.

    As the reaper steals your soul.
    To only succeed in its very goal.

    Your freedom driven from you.
    Don't know what your getting into.

    What has been taken away from me.
    But you can never see.

    a holy death is done.
    Death has just won.

    Living a life's lie.
    Saying you last good bye.

    Your fate can not be held by anyone.
    your life is over your life is done.

    You fall into the depths of hell.
    being rung and rung like a bloody bell.

    The bloody cloth of this persons life.
    Can't be determined by a knife.

    The love you once known.
    but that's only a clone.

    To only wish to die.
    Slit your wrist and cry.

    Whining in pain.
    being held by a chain

    To chant such words.
    Almost done, two thirds.

    To slit your wrist the second time.
    its suppost to be a crime

    no one around to witness it now
    while you scream and cry now.

    your laying on the bath room floor.
    blood filling wanting for the door.

    No one will call you a whore.
    Your death will be gore.

    You were to late
    you can't turn to wish away your fate.

    your killing your self hardcore.
    no one will miss you anymore.

    Your body lay lifeless
    that means no more stress.

    your body is numb.
    what have you become.

    Thats it you are so dead.
    No one will feel this dread.

    you are out of breath.
    This is death.

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    Re: Death(I made this out of bordom)

    WOW i REALLY LIKE YOUR POEMS THERE SOO AWSOMW i LOVE IT. iT like so deep and reall ahh I love it. Keep it up.(^.^)

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    NICE NICE THIS WAS DEEEEP! i loved it soo much keep making more ur talented
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    Re: Death(I made this out of bordom)

    good poem, i should post some of my poems on here, i love poetry so it is good to meet a fellow poetry writer
    Im the one who walks and lives in the shadows.

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    Re: Death (I made this out of boredom)

    that poem was awesome and kinda freakyO.o,but none the less awesome^_^

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