very awesoem way to ask for help when you cant kill your self
and wanting to kill your self over him not loving you that is very sad
and the ending was depressing i liked it very much. very awesome poem
Here my newest Lyrics that I just wrote today.Sorry that their a bit dark.I just wanted 2 get all of it out ya know lol PLease comment,Thanks
Title-Death = Love
Take me away from this Hell
Set me Free
If you can't even do that
You might as well go ahead and Kill Me!
Drown me
Put me under
Set me Free
By finally Killing Me!
Let me wollow in my Sadness
Let me drown in my Pain
Will you ever let me go?
Please Set Me Free!
Let Me Go,Set Me Free
Why can't you understand
Can't you grant me one last wish?
My finale request is...
Will you please Kill Me?!
Please Kill Me!
Wrap your hands around my neck
Drown me in the River,If you please
Choke the life out of me
Throw me into the Deadly Sea!
Watch me go under
I shall never return
I knew I could never have your Love
Your Heart would never be mine
Since I was all alone
I thought that maybe I should Die!...
Last edited by Shinigami's_Angel; Jul 25, 2006 at 07:28 PM.
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very awesoem way to ask for help when you cant kill your self
and wanting to kill your self over him not loving you that is very sad
and the ending was depressing i liked it very much. very awesome poem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
This poem is freaking awesome sweet man, nice job keep it up.
Thanks for the great comment Chris H. I'm happy that you like it.
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That was awsome, I like it... no I love it!!
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Wow,thanks Dead To The WorldI'm very happy that you think it's awesome and that you love it.
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very good, but why do your lyrics keep getting darker and darker? jk, i really liked it....................
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