Kitsunetsuki

Death To My Love:

Don't look at me that way,
I knew it,
Sooner or later this whould happen,
Go ahead draw your sword,
My heart is broken,
And forgotten,
Why must you look at me,
Go ahead,
End it.

Part 2:
Why must I draw my sword,
Agianst my love?
Of all people why them?
It's not right,
Is this our fate?
To die here together?
I must know the answers!
I can't take this anymore.
Let's both go to heaven,
At least no one can hurt us there.

Short simple and to the point!

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"Nothing happens by chance. Life has a design all it’s own. For one person’s sacrifice can be another’s salvation."~The Outer Limits
R.I.P. "I wont forget you"VP

Kasai

Hmmm. I'd like to see some imagery or more elaboration on what's happening.

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Kitsunetsuki

/heh
Well it's an old one that's been stuck in my head for awhile.
I can do better when I'm not bored.

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"Nothing happens by chance. Life has a design all it’s own. For one person’s sacrifice can be another’s salvation."~The Outer Limits
R.I.P. "I wont forget you"VP