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Newbie | death of my mommy I watched from the closet as he opened up the door. Dragged my mommy in and pushed her on the floor He yelled each bitter word he knew Mommy why would he hurt you? His face was twisted in such rage, I felt locked in a cage, I wanted to help but he'd hurt me too, Just like he did you. Tears fell down my cheeks as I silently cried He kicked you and hit you, saying you should die I wanted to say stop daddy But he'd get mad at me. I fell back onto my rump, As I heard a loud thump, I heard more yelling from daddy then one last cry, And that was the day I saw mommy die..
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