death of my mommy

nightmaregirl · Jul 07, 2007, 06:48 AM

I watched from the closet as he opened up the door.
Dragged my mommy in and pushed her on the floor
He yelled each bitter word he knew
Mommy why would he hurt you?

His face was twisted in such rage,
I felt locked in a cage,
I wanted to help but he'd hurt me too,
Just like he did you.

Tears fell down my cheeks as I silently cried
He kicked you and hit you, saying you should die
I wanted to say stop daddy
But he'd get mad at me.

I fell back onto my rump,
As I heard a loud thump,
I heard more yelling from daddy then one last cry,
And that was the day I saw mommy die..

tora_tora_yatta · Jul 07, 2007, 03:18 PM

wow...that was very powerful, good job!! I love to hear more from you

Jokerman · Jul 07, 2007, 04:41 PM

C0oo0ol.... I Liked It A Lot! Keep it up Nightmaregirl! :Smile:

sangogirl · Jul 09, 2007, 01:13 PM

wow i like the depressing peom. it's realy good. it makes you think. i like how you made it rhyme. rhyming poems have always been my fave. i hope to see more from you.

Jul 07, 2007, 06:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
nightmaregirl Newbie Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	death of my mommy I watched from the closet as he opened up the door. Dragged my mommy in and pushed her on the floor He yelled each bitter word he knew Mommy why would he hurt you? His face was twisted in such rage, I felt locked in a cage, I wanted to help but he'd hurt me too, Just like he did you. Tears fell down my cheeks as I silently cried He kicked you and hit you, saying you should die I wanted to say stop daddy But he'd get mad at me. I fell back onto my rump, As I heard a loud thump, I heard more yelling from daddy then one last cry, And that was the day I saw mommy die.. __________________
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Jul 07, 2007, 03:18 PM	#2 (permalink)
tora_tora_yatta Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In the arms of my loved one! Posts: 124 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 616	Re: death of my mommy wow...that was very powerful, good job!! I love to hear more from you __________________ Made by mi amigo Mveli2
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Jul 07, 2007, 04:41 PM	#3 (permalink)
Jokerman Otaku Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Arkham Asylum Posts: 466 Thanks: 69 Thanked 62 Times in 62 Posts Credits: 16,640	Re: death of my mommy C0oo0ol.... I Liked It A Lot! Keep it up Nightmaregirl! :Smile: __________________ *I believe…whatever doesn't kill you simply makes you…stranger.* Jokerman's Page: www.myspace.com/chessnutkidd Thanx Shin Ryuga!!!!
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sangogirl Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: TEXAS Posts: 371 Thanks: 1 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 4,003	Re: death of my mommy wow i like the depressing peom. it's realy good. it makes you think. i like how you made it rhyme. rhyming poems have always been my fave. i hope to see more from you. __________________
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