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    death is my place

    Im lost inside.
    Theres know place to go.
    My tears fall down my face.
    The blood thats in my heart.
    Is now on the ground where I lye.
    Darkness is my place.
    So I leave this place.
    With the last drop of my blood.
    I write your name.
    by leftinthedark aka nicole!

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    Re: death is my place

    Short,...nicely written but a lil grammar mistakes...nice imaginary again ^^ i like it

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    Re: death is my place

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Short,...nicely written but a lil grammar mistakes...nice imaginary again ^^ i like it
    im sorry im so bad at spelling and everything i at least try lol

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    Re: death is my place

    good poem could be longer though but I like it alot.
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