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Death is but a promise
made to us at birth.
Death is but our future
planned from the start.
Then why is it
people want to live?
Then why is it
people fear death?
We are taught young
all things die.
We are taught young
nothing lives forever.
Death is but a promise
we know will be full filled.
Death is but our future,
drawing ever closer.
Then why is it
we try and run?
Then why is it
people try and live forever?
very cool poem i loved it
and you aksed the most popular questions
there is why and i can say its the fear of the
unknown we want to live forever because all
we know is life death is something you dont know
about till you die and that scares people .
WoW DS, I never knew you were that deep lol, I sometime's fear death for a reason why? because you never know whats the next step.
Very nice poem star! Yet again, I am impressed! A very true poem. Nice and long. Great job, keep it up. I'd love to see more poems from you.
waw...i have felt this and ask this when every1 near me get's their promise fulfilled...good way of expressing it...i like it ^^
I liked how expressed this poem Star. It's a real good poem.
And most of the poem is quite true. From the day you are born, you are already dying. I quite like that. Good job on you Star. Hope to see some more of your poem work ^^
I loved it I have wonder sometimes...My greatest fear is death lol...
hey darkened_star,
awesome poem I don't mind death though
but death by bunnys scare the sh!t outta me though.
-_-yes I'm afraid of bunnys.
anywho awesome poem
keep up the good work