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    "Death is a Promise"

    Death is but a promise
    made to us at birth.
    Death is but our future
    planned from the start.
    Then why is it
    people want to live?
    Then why is it
    people fear death?
    We are taught young
    all things die.
    We are taught young
    nothing lives forever.
    Death is but a promise
    we know will be full filled.
    Death is but our future,
    drawing ever closer.
    Then why is it
    we try and run?
    Then why is it
    people try and live forever?

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    very cool poem i loved it
    and you aksed the most popular questions
    there is why and i can say its the fear of the
    unknown we want to live forever because all
    we know is life death is something you dont know
    about till you die and that scares people .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    WoW DS, I never knew you were that deep lol, I sometime's fear death for a reason why? because you never know whats the next step.

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    Very nice poem star! Yet again, I am impressed! A very true poem. Nice and long. Great job, keep it up. I'd love to see more poems from you.

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    waw...i have felt this and ask this when every1 near me get's their promise fulfilled...good way of expressing it...i like it ^^

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    I liked how expressed this poem Star. It's a real good poem.

    And most of the poem is quite true. From the day you are born, you are already dying. I quite like that. Good job on you Star. Hope to see some more of your poem work ^^

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    I loved it I have wonder sometimes...My greatest fear is death lol...
    Im the type of girl who burst out laughing in silents about something that happened yesterday

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    hey darkened_star,
    awesome poem I don't mind death though
    but death by bunnys scare the sh!t outta me though.
    -_-yes I'm afraid of bunnys.
    anywho awesome poem
    keep up the good work

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