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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    A very deep poem it is which is why i like it so much, nice job star
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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    I think that we try and live forever because we do not know what is waiting for us in the afterlife or whether we return and live another life. It's full of uncertainty and no one really wants to find out what it is in the end. We grow up knowing that death will come but we want to put it off as long as we can for the simple fact we don't want to die we also want to see our families grow and our children have children and then them have children. We want to see a lot more then we are able to see and so we try and cheat death by eating healthy exercising and doing everything in our power to stay healthy.

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    I am very impressed by this poem.Very unsual but great.I like the fact that you point out that nothing is a promise because it ends up going away,but we try and live forever is the fact that we are curious,wanting to see beyond the unknown which is quite impossible.But we can delay death by in various ways from living healthy to avoiding in issues that are not your own.

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    Wow really good poem I really like it. Yes that is the question that every one asks. I know I'm affriad because I don't what is waiting for me. But anyway I really like your poem it's very good.(^.^)

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    death is a promise if you're not already dead*smiles*

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    This poem you made darkened star is short yet it was fiiled with meaning. You also presented the a really interesting subject which was death. The choice of words really suites to the subject. As i finished reading your poem, it seemed that your poem replays in my mind. "To live is to die". Keep up the awesome job!

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    wow thats really good, i love it, it really saying something on Death
    the heart feels what the eyes can not see, and knows what the mind can not understand...

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    Re: "Death is a Promise"

    Do not post in topics that have been dead for more than 2 weeks.

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