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  1. Jul 19, 2006 06:25 PM #1
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    Death's Freedom

    Hey everybody Here's my newest Lyrics that I just wrote today! I hope everybody likes them even though their a bit Dark and all. Please comment,thanks


    Title-Death's Freedom

    I'm Flyin
    I'm Soarin
    I'm Fallin
    I'm Diein

    Such Depression,I am in
    No one could ever understand these feelings
    Such a Lonely life
    That is what mine is
    So Lonely,don't know where I belong

    There is so much Pain inside of me
    Even though I cut my body to shreads
    The Pain won't go away
    Even though I watch the Blood flow from me
    I still feel nothin inside of me

    No More Hope,I can't be Saved
    No More Hope,You can't Save me
    There's No More Hope,I'm gonna Die!
    No More Hope,This just might be "GoodBye"

    The Chains take hold of me
    My Wounds reopen
    I begin to Bleed
    Now I SCREAM!

    I Now Lie In My Own Pool Of Blood
    Cause Now I Am Free
    And May Fly Again...
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  2. Jul 19, 2006 06:29 PM #2
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    Re: Death's Freedom

    a veiw from asuicide point of view i like this
    it givves you an aidea of how someone might
    feel if they think the world is against them. and
    turning away a hellping hand because you dont think they
    can help you very defeatest and sadning
    i like how you made the point that there is no help for you
    and your gonna end it all no matter what . cool peom
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself
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  3. Jul 19, 2006 06:35 PM #3
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    Re: Death's Freedom

    Thanks Chris H. I'm happy that you like it And that was what I was going for in the Lyrics but not at 1st though lol But I still think them came out pretty good.
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    Re: Death's Freedom

    That was a really kool poem, keep it up.
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    Re: Death's Freedom

    Thanks for the comment Ketaro.
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    Re: Death's Freedom

    wow, that was really depressing, i liked it, though it brought back dark memories

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    Re: Death's Freedom

    Thanks Heartless_Mage. I'm happy that you liked it.
    And sorry for bring up bad memories for you.
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    Re: Death's Freedom

    wow tht actually very nicely.....great poem

    I love how u put urself as Death created u freeing u from ur earthly body....i love how the first part made sort of an impact....

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