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    Death's a funny little thing

    Death is a part of life
    It will give your family strife
    No matter what you do
    Death will always haunt you
    So don’t worry about the after-life.

    Death is here to screw you over
    It will treat you like a dog and say roll over
    Unless you can avoid it
    Which will really annoy it
    It will still want you to come on over.

    Now listen here my little friend
    This info will help you till the very end
    It will soon be at your door
    You won’t be able to avoid it any more
    It will be laughing at your pitiful end…
    "May the force be with you"- Yoda

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    Re: Death's a funny little thing

    It's a good poem. I think you could have used more commas though. It flowed really well and it a intersting rhyme. I enjoyed your poem, hope to see more of your work in the future.
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    Re: Death's a funny little thing

    thank you. it was a quick poem to think of... i really didn't try
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